
My only excuse is I was writing away from the net and it completely slipped my overtaxed mind!
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Some of my favorite scenes to write are when Finley is doing something morally questionable. When I’d doing an Intrigue, I love when a character has to do the wrong thing for the right reason. Having to make those kinds of choices or wiggle out of a tight situation really allows me to explore a character’s flaws and I find those more interesting than their heroic moments.
So what was the worst thing an Intrigue character did? When I did the Landry Brother series – 7 brothers, felt more like seven levels of Hell at times – One of the brother’s had (unknown to him) been raising his stepson as a single father but once he discovered the truth, he didn’t tell the long-suffering biological mother for a long time. Morally wrong, but done for the right reason in the character’s mind. If you justify and motivate it correctly – in this case he wanted to know two things – was the biological mother a fit custodian; and he wanted to protect the son he’d been raising for nearly five years from having his safe, comfortable loving world destroyed. Intrigues being a Harlequin imprint, the characters have to be heroic, so they can’t be too, too bad.
Finley is and always has been a big hairy liar – in a good way. I conceived the character as very flawed and very independent. That combination often has her doing illegal things as well as selfish things. It’s actually harder to write a character like that because you have to straddle the fine line between keeping her likeable to the readers while she’s doing things that are inappropriate and/or flat out illegal. Oh, and did I mention that her thoughts are honest, which doesn’t always mean nice or kind. I think those honest moments – even if she’s thinking something really snarky about another person - humanize her and give her depth.
So bad things/choices – if you motivate them properly and well, the readers will overlook an awful lot. Realistic characters need those shades of gray. My favorite examples to ask yourself are these: Is your character being assertive or is she being a bitch? Being assertive is good, a bitch, not so much. Is your hero consistent – does the flaw show itself in other areas of his life? A man who is a workaholic could be considered selfish (bad) or he could be one of those people who gives all his energies and attention to any situation (good).
Happy Writing!
I'm 3/4 of the way through Knock 'em Dead and Finley just pulled another, "What are you thinking, Fin???" moments. Liam, of course, witnessed the whole thing. Speaking of Liam -- he's so hot, he could melt the elastic on your panties. I swear, every one of their scenes together is like foreplay for the reader. Two books of foreplay so far, Rhon. Not Fair! :)
Thanks Mary :) Glad you're enjoying Fin and Liam. Foreplay can be more interesting than sex. Then again, so can chocolate.